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this is how it feels for her
Past the lipstick and secret lies the whore,
No matter who she is or what she does.
She\'s sold at first breath.
Her candy coated face,
Wrapped in fate
And behind her eyes lives the control of man
Just maybe this all fits together
For a girl,
Past the porcelain and perfume lies the sin,
No matter who she is or what she does
She\'s sold at first breath.
But these girls, show girls
Movie stars, vixens,
Nuns and sex kittens;
faster she twirls
Forever glued behind the television screen
Be the flower, proclaim your power
What a life it is to be living a 2-dimensional scene
It’s said that it sells, they like what they will never do
Packaged and taped, hand and foot
Nailed to a man; she’s now in good hands.

And this is how it feels
Beyond plump cheeks and pink dresses lies the whore,
No matter who she is or what she does.
She\'s sold at first breath.
An androgynous name in these crowds,
Blending to mud in these watercolour clouds.
©2003-2009 ~smashingviolin
:iconsmashingviolin:

Author's Comments

written awhile ago. this is not meant to be an anti-male feminist nazi poem or whatnot. it's just society from one of many point of views.

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:iconnelsmiley:
I love it

*le sigh*

the points of view we do look at...

the image you have created...

wonderous

+fav

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*dances naked* :eyepopping:

...I am nobody's little weasel
:iconapocryphal-angel:
no i dont think it sounds sexist at all... it sounds like a revolt against ones own lust. a feeling i am too accustomed to.
:icontorachan:
This is a beautiful poem o.o :clap:

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Hi there my names Birdie, and I'm an Ass Nin from the Hidden Village of Ketsunoana. May I take a picture of you Ass? Your Ass will save my village from destruction *nodds*
:iconmincedniku:
Wow~ Really nicely written. I love the flow of the bit in the middle:
But these girls, show girls
Movie stars, vixens,
Nuns and sex kittens;
faster she twirls


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~挽き肉

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